J.C. Belding

Great title and imagery, but the poem's voice seems a little too commanding to go well with the topic. That said, this is an interesting interpretation of love and certainly ...

This has some real charm to it. Great story telling!

This is really good! Your use of description was great. Nice plot too.

Thanks for the comments. I adedd an extra staza that should take care of any confusion.

Nice poem. The rythm was slightly akward in this particular style though. Other than that I enjoyed reading it, especially the ending. Good job.

This was really cool. I liked your concepts a lot. The only thing I would do is make the wording slightly more poetic. I think that would really improve it.

Great poem. Seriously, this is really good. I love how, well, poetic it sound. It was a pleasure reading it.

Thanks for all the stars and compliments. Means a lot.

Great job! Very nice imagery and wording. Just one tiny thing on your 6th to last line: you should change the does topast tenseto make the line sound more appropriate. ...

This is pretty good. Nice imagrey but I think it really needs to be expanded. I felt like the poem was just beggining when I finished.

Very nice ideas and themes. The only real problem is that the meter is rather bumpy. Trying to workon smoothing it out and you'll have an excellent poem.

Thanks for the advice. I can't believe I didn't catch that mistake earlier.

Intresting poem. I really liked your first stanza, but you should divide your second one into two just before "Across the ages;" Also, your second to last line kind of ...

thanks for the responses. They were very helpful.

Great job! Your imagery was very nicely done. Your wording and choice of words was fantastic. It was truly a pleasure to read such a well-done piece.